Tuesday, February 22, 2011

The Other Side.. (arbit imagery)


As far as I know you,
Or, I must say,
As far as, You wanted me to know you;
I could make out something,
Something which I would pen down replacing myself as you,
Which would mean, A dare to pen down a dedication to me by you.

(following lines are to be read as if they are from her....... )

I very well know your feelings for me,
And I really cherish them.
I would love to preserve them.
I wish I could express myself, the way you do,
All I can say for now, is
I do care for you,
I do have immense respect for you.

I do read, all your compositions you silently dedicate,
But to respond, you very well know, I hesitate.
I have read them all,
And somehow, they seem to persuade me to fall.

But, Its not about what I feel, how I feel , for you
Its the life we live,
Its the expectations from us,
that though bitter, but are the only ones , true.

Its not that in anyway I dislike you,
Its not from you, that I have some pain,
But the moments we share, right now,
we very well know, will not forever remain.

And when it would be time to part,
We would be left with a bleeding heart!!

Let not that moment arrive,
Let's not be questionable,
Let's bear the pain of the present,
Why compound it to the extent, unbearable!!

You do make me feel very special,
I wish, I could make you feel the same.
But, you know, why I can't
The circumstances amongst us are to blame!!

But yeah, from you I have a genuine complaint,
Its about the pain, the pain you carry,
Its something, that to me is sometimes scary!!
If in fate, in future, we may meet across some lane..

Let's just fulfill our duties,
Let's just meet answerable expectations,
Leave the rest as it is,
Why pave the way to undestined destinations!!


14 comments:

  1. Very sad when outside forces deny what could be a higher, more beautiful love. Fulfill duties, meet expectations, reasons of society or family arrangements. Out of pure love-a higher plane, invoking the blessings of God, blessed forever.

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  2. true... !!

    Thanks for the kind words.. :)

    God Bless Thee.

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  3. Muuuhhhaaaaa! Jabbar works - once again dude.

    (Waise ladiez kuch confused lag rahi poem se :P)

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  4. Thankooo - once again dude :D

    and now dis comment leaves me perplexed, what was the meaning, really too hard to surmount your sense of humor.. :P :D

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  5. beutiful!!!
    the pain of love unrequited is both a pain and promise at the same time :)

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  6. nicely written. hats off

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  7. Awesome Dude......Truely touching.....
    I wish someday der would be a Happizzz Ending.....
    May b somedy.......

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  8. @Bhavya10 thanks for the appreciation. I never expected, Someone like @midnightpoetess would find my compositions worthy enough to deserve your hats off! :)

    God Bless. :)

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  9. @Vaibhav Thanks ,for the kind words. I wish my life were a tinsel town's product, and then , for sure, I could expect so called - "Happieez ending" .. :)

    God Bless Thee :)

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  10. grt ya ! love the concept ! it portrays a strong passion which z quite an essentiality in romantics ! i like it ! :)

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  11. awesome composition!!
    luvd d way u tried to understand her part n d way u conveyd it
    its indeed very touching
    luv all ur composition dey r straight from ur heart
    very pure feelings

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  12. @Anonymous (@agarwalnaina confirmed via twitter)

    ThankYou..
    God Bless Thee :)

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  13. @Pragati Aah.. so finally here lands your comment, of which I was sure, inspite of your adamant refusal!!
    Thanks a Lot for your ever honest and sincere comments!!

    God Bless Thee :)

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