Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Just So You Know

I loved, and love you,
Unknown, If loved by you.
If you knew, I did cry each day,
Wonder, what would you say!


Never, could look into your eyes,
Unaware, if indeed, they do care.
Never, could look into your heart,
I just wish, I was somewhere there.


Urge, Urge to ask you,
If you would be mine, forever.
Urge, Urge to ask you,
Do you even dream, of us being together!!


Wish, Wish I could tell you,
How deeply & madly, I yearn for you!
Wish, Wish I could tell you,
How my heart melts, when I think of me & you.


Amidst the prolonged silence,
I feared, If I would lose you.
Nothing heard. Nothing said,
Would imply, feelings dead!


But, Just so you know, I am still into you.
Just so you know, I still love you.


Urge, Urge to decipher the future of me and you.
Urge, Urge to see, If we can ever make it through!!










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26 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 15, 2011 at 10:08 PM

    hope you make it through.... dream love proposal it was :P

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  2. UnknownNovember 15, 2011 at 10:54 PM

    thankyou ji.. Thankyou (@doogdoogibaba) for your blessings..

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  3. PratyushNovember 15, 2011 at 11:15 PM

    Weight, weight me like you do with vegetables,
    wait, wait is only what I do;

    some day, some day you will remember me,
    while everyday, everyday I ask God to bless you.

    [Awesome work bro, awesome, as I said, you do bring out a poet in us too].

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  4. AnonymousNovember 15, 2011 at 11:16 PM

    very nice g..............
    continue in same way,......hamare pyare poet g....

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  5. AnjooNovember 15, 2011 at 11:20 PM

    very nicely written..specially the crafting of words..mind blowing...:)
    Keep writing...bless you...

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  6. whocaresNovember 15, 2011 at 11:34 PM

    the cute and curious phase of love.....expressed in a limpid style.....nice 1.....looks soon more intense one's gonna come up....

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  7. talktoaakashNovember 15, 2011 at 11:39 PM

    luvly............nd soul touching...........

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  8. UnknownNovember 15, 2011 at 11:45 PM

    @pratyush (faltoo) ROFLMAOCOPTER , and thats why I say, YOU MOTIVATE ME.. :p

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  9. UnknownNovember 15, 2011 at 11:47 PM

    @anjoo thanks for the kind words :) God Bless The

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  10. UnknownNovember 15, 2011 at 11:50 PM

    @whocares really thanks for taking the effort to comment over here, and nothing as such planned for forthcoming one.. :) GOD BLESS THEE...

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  11. UnknownNovember 15, 2011 at 11:51 PM

    @talktoakash thanks bhai :)) #GodBlessThee

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  12. RimpleNovember 16, 2011 at 4:44 AM

    Beautiful sentiments put together in a lovely poem.:)
    Hope the message get's through:)
    God Bless! Love u loads xoxoxo

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  13. UnknownNovember 16, 2011 at 4:54 AM

    @rimple (aka @mssuperfluous ) flattered I am to hear lovely words and to have been praised by you. #LOveYoUToO

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  14. PiyushNovember 16, 2011 at 7:01 AM

    Its one very beautiful movement in our life when we try 2 express

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  15. AnonymousDecember 9, 2011 at 5:07 PM

    Just so you know.. you are simply d best
    Luv reading each of ur compositions :)

    Pragati

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  16. UnknownDecember 10, 2011 at 8:24 PM

    Hey Anonymous (aka Pragati) You have been the sincere reader to my blog, ever since I remember. Thanks for liking the posts, and baaki aur blogs padh fir pata chalega how ghatiya are mine!! I seriously don't like my style of compositions, have been saying this ever.. But, whpo doesnt like being appreciated, your appreciations are really good and sincere ones :)

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  17. AnonymousDecember 16, 2011 at 11:57 PM

    This is very well written :) I know someone who should read this...

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  18. UnknownDecember 17, 2011 at 12:50 AM

    @TheBluntBlogger Thanks! :)

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  19. Saru SinghalDecember 17, 2011 at 3:00 AM

    Awww, this is beautiful and love the last two lines.

    In fact third and fifth paragraph blew me away:)

    Keep writing such awesome poem:)

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  20. RinalDecember 25, 2011 at 3:40 PM

    Its lovely!! Love the way you can put things in words with such simplicity... :)

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  21. UnknownDecember 25, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    @Rinal Thanks for the appreciation :)

    May the wind always be on your back and the sun upon your face and may the winds of destiny carry you aloft to dance with the stars.

    God Bless Thee :)

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  22. UnknownFebruary 25, 2012 at 1:17 PM

    lovely, love the way u have expressed your emotions !

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  23. isimplylovemakeupFebruary 29, 2012 at 2:13 PM

    beautifully written and totally in awe of how you put across such complex feeling in such simple words... I hope you do succeed :)

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  24. scorpiogalMarch 17, 2012 at 3:47 PM

    It is so so beautiful and what an use of language.. wonderful. i really envy the lucky gal :-) Keep loving, Keep writing, and keep taking care of yourself and expressing yourself
    jyothi
    http://imaginopia.wordpress.com

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